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如何建立自己的写作模版-附范文一篇

[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]如何建立自己的写作模版[/font][font=Times New Roman]-[/font][font=宋体]附范文一篇[/font][/color][/size]
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[font=宋体][size=3][color=#000000]如何达到这一点，以下有几点建议：[/color][/size][/font]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]1.[/font][font=宋体]结构。[/font][/color][/size]
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[font=宋体][size=3][color=#000000]条理清楚，一个段落表达一个意思，段落宜适中，不宜太长。[/color][/size][/font]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]针对[/font][font=Times New Roman]IELTS250[/font][font=宋体]字，可如此分配：[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Para 1: introduction: state the fact, and show your standpoint.(for or against, better both)[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Para 2: key sentence support evidence (for)[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Para 3: key sentence support evidence (against)[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Para 4: conclusion[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]根据你的[/font][font=Times New Roman]ideas[/font][font=宋体]，[/font][font=Times New Roman]for / against[/font][font=宋体]，可以多写一段，写出两个[/font][font=Times New Roman]for or [/font][font=宋体]两个[/font][font=Times New Roman]against, [/font][font=宋体]表明你更倾向于哪一方面。[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]在表达观点时，要记住一点，[/font][font=Times New Roman]should[/font][font=宋体]之类不应用得太多，因为你是在阐述一个观点，这是主观的，不要太绝对，如果换作是中文，你一讲就是“你应该怎么样”？[/font][font=Times New Roman] [/font][font=宋体]读者会觉得，你在强迫他接受你的观点，可以用一些[/font][font=Times New Roman]be likely to or may/might[/font][font=宋体]。[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]2.[/font][font=宋体]连词，副词和短语的运用[/font][/color][/size]
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[font=宋体][size=3][color=#000000]在有清晰的结构之后，要有连词把各个段落有机联结在一起，还要有段中句与句之间的连接。[/color][/size][/font]
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[font=宋体][size=3][color=#000000]副词来增强形容词与动词的表现力；另外不必一定要使用复杂的词汇，真正地道的英文，短语用得非常多。[/color][/size][/font]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]比如连词：[/font][font=Times New Roman]Hence[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]    [/font][font=宋体]副词：[/font][font=Times New Roman]Dramatically[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]    [/font][font=宋体]短词：[/font][font=Times New Roman]Be likely to[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]3.[/font][font=宋体]简单，复杂句的并用，不要吝啬“，”[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]如果一篇文章一看没几个“，”，几乎全是复杂句，显得很有水准，但[/font][font=Times New Roman]reader-friendly? [/font][font=宋体]每段的中心句可用复杂句。[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]4.[/font][font=宋体]语法：单复数，[/font][font=Times New Roman]a/an/the[/font][font=宋体]，不要缩写[/font][font=Times New Roman].[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]语法错误是难免的，但不要犯一些低级的，比如单复数，还有最易错的是如何运[/font][font=Times New Roman]"the".[/font][font=宋体]还有不要把[/font][font=Times New Roman]did not [/font][font=宋体]缩成[/font][font=Times New Roman]didn't. [/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]5.[/font][font=宋体]用词的多样性[/font][font=Times New Roman].[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]常用的单词可多记几个同义词，这样在文章中读起来更舒服些。比如可能[/font][font=Times New Roman],may,perhaps,be likely to[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]因此[/font][font=Times New Roman]hence, thus, consequently, as a result. [/font][font=宋体]重要[/font][font=Times New Roman]important vital crucial
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[font=宋体][size=3][color=#000000]整理一下比较重要的一些词与短语，相信会对大家写作有所帮助[/color][/size][/font]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]burning question [/font][font=宋体]目前急待解决的问题，最吸引人的问题，可用于第一段，亦可用[/font][font=Times New Roman]pay attention to, attract .... , raise ... concern[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]完全地[/font][font=Times New Roman] altogether , completely,
pure and simple([/font][font=宋体]完全的[/font][font=Times New Roman])[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]基本上[/font][font=Times New Roman] by and large[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]全面地[/font][font=Times New Roman] across-the board[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]全面的[/font][font=Times New Roman] comprehensive[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]许多：[/font][font=Times New Roman]a plethora of (opportunities)=a large number of [/font][font=宋体]不可能数用[/font][font=Times New Roman]a large amount of[/font][/color][/size]
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scads of , dozens of [/font][font=宋体]，[/font][font=Times New Roman]the bulk of[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]几个：[/font][font=Times New Roman]A couple of =several[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]唯一而不可缺少的[/font][font=Times New Roman]
unique and indispensable [/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]不可避免的[/font][font=Times New Roman]
inevitable = unavoidable[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Unpalatable fact [/font][font=宋体]不如人意的事实[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Peter out [/font][font=宋体]慢慢消失[/font][font=Times New Roman]fade away [/font][font=宋体]逐渐减弱[/font][font=Times New Roman]Play a pivotal role = vital [/font][font=宋体]关键的[/font][font=Times New Roman]= important[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]from the minuscule low to the majestic high [/font][font=宋体]从最低到最高[/font][font=Times New Roman]Expedite = speed up = accelerate
[/font][font=宋体]加速[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Tackle (fix, deal with, handle, solve) the problem[/font][font=宋体]（[/font][font=Times New Roman]issue[/font][font=宋体]）[/font][font=Times New Roman] [/font][font=宋体]解决，处理问题[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]better off,[/font][font=宋体]更好，[/font][font=Times New Roman]eg. It is better off taking a rest. [/font][font=宋体]休息一下会更好。[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]归因于[/font][font=Times New Roman]Ascribe to = attribute to [/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]由于[/font][font=Times New Roman] by virtue of = due to = thanks to [/font][font=宋体]接名词[/font][font=Times New Roman]+ [/font][font=宋体]从句[/font][font=Times New Roman]
because = inasmuch as [/font][/color][/size]
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[font=宋体][size=3][color=#000000]下面是澳洲本地新闻网上的一些摘录[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Times New Roman][size=3][color=#000000]1. The government has no plans to impose a white elephant on the aviation industry in Australia.[/color][/size][/font]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]注：[/font][font=Times New Roman]1.[/font][font=宋体]用[/font][font=Times New Roman]has no plans [/font][font=宋体]等同于[/font][font=Times New Roman]does not have plans,[/font][font=宋体]这样加强语气；[/font][/color][/size]
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2. impose.. On.[/font][/color][/size]
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3.white elephant [/font][font=宋体]无用的东西，这就相当于中文的短语，用词简单，但显地道[/font][/color][/size]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3][color=#000000]2. A narrowing in Australia's interest rate advantage over the US has also been weighing on the local currency in the wake of the US Federal Reserve's recent rate hike.[/color][/size][/font]
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[font=宋体][size=3][color=#000000]随着美联储近期升息，澳洲对美国逐渐缩小的利息优势影响着本地外汇市场。[/color][/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3][color=#000000]3. Australia has just notched up its 43rd consecutive trade deficit. Export growth has stalled in the past three years.[/color][/size][/font]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]注：[/font][font=Times New Roman]1. notch up,= achieve , [/font][font=宋体]这个短语说是口语化，但在本地最大的报纸和[/font][font=Times New Roman]ABC[/font][font=宋体]的新闻网上也会常常出现[/font][/color][/size]
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2.stall [/font][font=宋体]停转，停止[/font][font=Times New Roman]
consecutive [/font][font=宋体]连续的[/font][/color][/size]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3][color=#000000]5. Can someone please shed some light on why the announcement just out has had such a negative effect??
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]注：这是摘自于当地人的论坛里，[/font][font=Times New Roman]shed some light on [/font][font=宋体]解释[/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]6. There’s still no let-up in the price of the highly sought-after commodity, which again is soaring to record highs on concern about tight supplies.
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]非常吃香的商品（指金属和能源）价格上涨没有止步，由于担心供应吃紧，又一次创下新高。[/font][font=Times New Roman] [/font][/color][/size]
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[size=3][color=#000000][font=宋体]注：选自财经新闻：[/font][font=Times New Roman]let-up [/font][font=宋体]停止，[/font][font=Times New Roman]sought-after [/font][font=宋体]吃香的，句式不错[/font][/color][/size]
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写作举例。



主题：讨论电脑对孩子的影响



Of late, computers have been flooding into our lives and a resulting burning issue has attracted people’s attentions, which is whether the computer is beneficial to the children or not. A large number of people are in favor of using computer by children, and some hold an opposite standpoint. Personally, I prefer to the latter one.



Obviously, powerful computers are excellent tools for teenagers which contribute considerably to their study. Traditionally, young students are required to memorize dozens of formulations to calculate mathematic questions. But now, by virtue of the powerful computer, they are able to do those mathematic quickly and lightly. In addition, the children can access the internet to find more useful information related to their course by computers. Thus, teenagers will benefit from an appropriate manipulating of the computer.



Unfortunately, there are full of junk and illegal information on the Internet, and such information is likely to impose negative effects on the children. In reality, young men mostly fail to distinct which information is helpful for them. On the contrary, they might be attracted by junk and illegal resources such as violent, adult information and so forth; those resources absolutely influence the growing teenagers negatively inasmuch as they might think those information is right and tend to imitate what they read. As a result, their lives would be changed considerably.





After foregone simple discussion and I am able to conclude that, it is apparent that the functional computer will be a helpful tool if the children manipulate it properly. However, the huge potential negative influences can not be ignored due to weak self-control teenagers have.







雅思写作填空模版

                                                                                            



对立式观点



1.       选择一方观点进行说明



给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生支持一方并进行说明。



具体表述如下：

Topic: Some people like A, others like B. Which one do you prefer—A or B? Give specific reasons t to illustrate your answer.



在这个命题形式的摸版中有些大写字母的含义如下：

A和B表示选择的两种观点；

Choose A和Choose B表示对A，B的选择；

DO C指题目中提及的某件事情，如：Some people prefer A in order to DO C.

请考生在实际写作中根据题目写他们各自所代表的内容。

MODEL (1)

Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer①because I think A has more advantages.

There are numerous reasons why②, and I would like in here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that③. It can be given a concrete example④.

Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that⑤. Take the case of a thing that⑥.

One very strong argument for A is that⑦. This demonstrate the undeniable fact that⑧.

Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, ⑨.

But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than hose of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that⊙.

以上①--⑨分别填写的内容为

①表明自己的观点；赞同

②填入赞同A的句子

③赞同A的第一个原因

④举例说明原因一

⑤赞同A的第二个原因

⑥举例说明原因二

⑦说明赞叹A的第三个原因

⑧表明A的优势

⑨列出B的1-2个优势

⊙总结观点





MODEL (2)

Some people believe A. These people point out the fact that①. However, other people believe B. They point out that②. They say that③. As far as I am concerned, my preference is for A.

The main reason why I prefer A is that④. We can see that⑤.

A more personal reason why I like A is⑥. As I member, ⑦.

A is superior in another way, that is ⑧ because that⑨.

As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A, such as⊙. But these can be compensated by its advantages. So, in comparison with B, A is surely a clever choice.

以上①--⑨分别填写的内容为

①支持A的理由

②支持B的理由

③进一步阐述支持B的原因

④支持A的第一个原因

⑤举例说明原因一

⑥支持A的第二个原因

⑦举例说明原因二

⑧支持A的第三个原因

⑨举例说明原因三

⊙列举出A的劣势

大作文写作模板

写作模板一

In present-day society, the human race is progressing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas. Accompanying all the boons brought about by the profound societal changes have come some sufferings, and _____ is very prominent among them. Some people assert that _____; while the adversaries strongly contend that ____. From my own perspective, their views have both merit and demerit.



Granted, there could be some positive effects ___may bring about. In the first place, 分论点一. For instance, 例证 /  语言论证。In the second place, 分论点二. 论证.



However, the opponents firmly believe that ____., and they against it for a couple of sound reasons. Firstly,  ___. Secondly,  ____. Thirdly, _____



In the final analysis, I concede that to some extent, 第一个观点. However, 第二个观点。 On balance, I am convinced that 自己的观点。





写作模板二

In this day and age, the Homo sapiens is advancing at a shocking rate in a host of domains. Along with all the boons brought about by the high-tech wonders have come some sufferings, and the ____ is manifest among them. A recent study conducted by ____(机构名称) revealed that ____现象。Hence, it is of paramount importance that we ascertain the causes of ____ and identify the effective remedies of this phenomenon.



As I see it, the causes of _____ are manifold. Firstly,   ____. Secondly, ______. Last but not the least, _____



Given the severity of _____. We have no alternative but to take vigorous measures to address this thorny issue. To begin with, -_____(resolution one): further, ____(resolution two): lastly,_____ (resolution three)



To summarize, the causes of __--are multiple. I just point out some of them. But if _____, _____ and ____ work together to resolve _______, the incidence of _____will fall immediately.



















图表作文开头部分经典句型



1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___

   According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be  concluded from it that ______________.



2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、（内容）的图片

   There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ___________.



3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___

   Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like

   ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.







如何更好地利用写作模版





      写作属于产出性技能（productive skills），是大多数考生比较薄弱的环节。对于大多数考生而言，对书面英语的运用要真正达到飞洒自如，随心所欲的境界，尚有相当差距。由于语言能力的限制，往往是有感没法发出来——思想到位而语言不到位。有鉴于此，不少写作老师对模版和套句的作用极为推崇，认为能短时间内令考生的表达“乌鸡变凤凰”。



       我们不可否认模版和套句在顺利通过雅思写作考试所起的作用，但是部分雅思备考书籍和网站提供的所谓“高分写作模版”能否令考生短期内迅速考取高分呢？答案是否定的。由于使用同一个模版，考生必然写出千人一面的文章，令本已疲惫不堪的考官倍感厌倦，（考官可能因为某一高分模版“恶心”好几天呢）不少考生因此失分惨重，背上“雷同”、“剽窃”的黑锅，甚至得零分。



       那我们该怎样正确利用模版呢？考生不应一字不漏照搬出版的写作书这样容易给考官判为雷同，此外由于模版可能与自身水平不相匹配，往往给人“乞丐带钻石项链”的感觉。比较可取的方法是参考优秀模版的谋篇布局，注意收集相关的其承转合的佳句，然后根据自身的水平，组装成“个性化”的模版，从而避免被判为雷同。

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